Thursday, June 18, 2009

especially invoked from this mere thoughts...

dear....this very post is especially dedicated to you...

thou harvests the incapacitating feelings...
that bites through the very veins that survived the siege...
a siege of heart...

predicament of thou act is way too broad...
for neither thou nor me to tell...
the tender looks...the heaven glances of thou..
melted even the very humongous frozen throne...
the saddened one will be joyful to see the look of yours...
the happy one even sings aloud,merrier than ever...
all those for the invasion of thou..

for these all fuzzy-wuzzy dimwit lane....
i thouhgtfully ask for forgiveness....
for being uncomprehendable one...
which i cannot fathom..
upon the uncontrollable feeling...

the warmth of thou care...
which permanently makes me flew on the cloud nine..
which shivers and shaken the tormented souls..
upon your heavenly gaze...
even the revered land will bow down...
even the crimson sky will fall agonizing....
even the timid and rigid sea will sunk itself deep down....
for the one I truly adored..



p/s : hahahahaha..siyes penat weh memerah otak nak menjadi jiwang omputeh....aku cantum-cantumkan perkataan yang aku pernah belajar..daripada buku-buku yang aku pernah baca..but this so-called "sonnet" is purely deep down from the bottom of my heart....

haha...latihan awal untuk LSP404 next sem..orait.....salam..~!

13 comments:

aurox_3d said...

uwekkkk....uwekkkk...uwekkkk

Unknown said...

so what..jeles???haha...~

nini_uniey said...

huahuahua...

Unknown said...

ape yg huahuahua nye nie...

Qyra Humayra said...

fussyoo!!!..
hahah...
jiwang karat abes!
for sure bazilah cair cm mentega!..
hahaha...

Cik Nurul said...

kenapa ayat ni ada unsur2 DoTa?
hahaha..nice one dude...
keep it up...

Unknown said...

kak danya : haha..kadan2 jer...yazid xpernah wat ker..hehehe..

amer : hehe...bagus2..ko perasan...saje aku nk wat lawak skit de unsur2 dot*..hehe..

Unknown said...

hahaha..
sokong azri..

pergh...taksabar nak kawen da nih..
dok usm pun rindu.
dok umah lg la..

haha...

Qyra Humayra said...

haha..
xtau la yzd pnh wat ke x...
yg 2 kene tny tuan punye bdn sndri la agk nye...kot..
hehehe..

Unknown said...

lau aku da kawen nnti..
nak wat gak la..
biar nampk skit aku sayang kat bini aku tuh..

hehe..

:D

forevershashasha said...

lsp 404 xsuh wat sonnet pon..
lhp 456 pon xsuh gak..
hehe...

Unknown said...

hem..akuKah..haha..memang ar takde..kalo ade mmg pelik ar usm nye syllabus nie...hu4..

Unknown said...

hem..akuKah..haha..memang ar takde..kalo ade mmg pelik ar usm nye syllabus nie...hu4..